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Derrick Davis commented on Debt Collector: Chapter 1
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This chapter has been revised and reworked with additional comments from the community.

Derrick Davis Dec 23, 2014

This project is actually finished and has been published. Its currently available on Amazon for kindle download and paperback version as well.

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Derrick Davis updated chapter 1 for Debt Collector
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Chapter 1          Drenched with sweat, Franco found himself in the middle of a living nightmare.  Running through a dark alley with someone chasing after him was not exactly how he wanted to spend his Saturday night.  Running was not Franco’s strong...

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Chapter 5                    He stared back at Trina as he left Starbucks and noticed she’s talking on the phone then she got into a black Mercedes-Benz CL65.  When did she get the money for a car like that?  That’s a 200,000-dollar car.  There’s no way the club is raking that much...

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Derrick Davis commented on Debt Collector: Chapter 0
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This has been completely reworked and edited. I opened with the explanation of the Web at the beginning rather than leave it until the end because it seemed to flow better into the next chapter.

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Derrick Davis updated chapter 0 for Debt Collector
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Prologue   The Web Collection Agency, or simply the Web, is an underground gambling crime syndicate.  Having ties to almost everyone and everything, the Web still must be discrete concerning its collections.  They employ enforcers, simply known as debt collectors, to carry out...

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